Ocart

A/N So finally the first chapter of my original story is done! It would have been finished sooner had I not got distracted by Lego Ninjago but hey it’s done now. I would really appreciate constructive criticism because I know my writing isn’t very good. It is just a hobby but that doesn’t mean I don’t want to improve. I have some picture of the main character’s on DA if you’re interested in seeing that (link to my DA on my profile and if you’re reading this on DA well this is a bit irrelevant and I’m too lazy to write a different A/N for DA) I’d like to thank my friend who goes by HefaBu